
first rain..........
runs a mild tingle,
as d little drops jingle;
onto the lucid panes, dancing diamonds fall,
drip down with an exaggerated crawl..
thirsty, the yearning ground below,
graced by a few clouds' mellow,
every drop spreads...with its share of joy,
wets every stone,every corner coy!
with the plunging, rhythmic beat,
a dreamy mind is on a wilder fleet;
a subdued sun's dimmed ray,
makes all worries shy away!
pushing me toward poetic ponder,
my alter ego inches to thoughts yonder;
that first fragrance filling my senses..
not a single muscle nor nerve now tenses!
a ready smile, needs no preparation;
a deep sense of peace and veneration...
for, the dry summer's first rain,
alleviates every soul gnawing pain!!
-shil
yesterday!! :)
4th may 2006
7 Comments:
ding dong....
1 ERROR found...
FACTUAL error....
yesterday wasnt 4th may :p
btw, I forgot to wish u...
Welcome to the Blogging world!!!
Happy Blogging !!!!
this is a very good one... loved d first stanza
Is it the rain that made me catch this terrible cold??
or is it the ice cream or am i just getting too old???
It should rain where it is required, not on a tarred road and not in every land,
I am sure there is a serious flaw with nature, rain hasnt been properly planned.
A neatly pressed cloth takes in loadsa work & preparation,
And when its spoilt in the rain it leads to anger & frustration.
There i was enjoying this noon, it was hot and i was happy with sweat,
And now i am totally drenched, I hate it when my undies get wet :(.
Nice blog BTW
thanks s~m~i~l~e,
u need to read some books i observe :p
di,
me too,like dat n 3rd stanza a lot :)
madhu,
....................... ur jus so SAD..!really cant und one cant like d rain..but dats an amusin take u ve posted..hahaha!
well here's showing i have read the masterpiece a.k.a. ur blog... :)
i'll repeat myself... nice poem... but u must be more careful abt the date!!!
hey..this one's also nice too.....but u know,,,,i dont understand high level english and all....so just was seeing for rhyming words...........
btw,,i have been seeing ur blog for 3-4 days.....that yesterday hasnt changed to 'day before yesterday', then to 'day before day before yesterday and so on'!!!!!!!!
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